From b19242eeb178599611485c57f3399ab8a2eed92c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Steven Bellamy Date: Thu, 24 Aug 2017 14:41:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Updating the meta description --- src/closing-disclosure/index.html | 5 +++-- src/explore-rates/index.html | 4 ++-- src/loan-estimate/index.html | 4 ++-- src/loan-options/index.html | 6 +++--- src/mortgage-closing/index.html | 2 +- src/mortgage-estimate/index.html | 2 +- src/process/_vars-process.html | 13 +++++-------- 7 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/closing-disclosure/index.html b/src/closing-disclosure/index.html index b59b8462e..60a994f14 100644 --- a/src/closing-disclosure/index.html +++ b/src/closing-disclosure/index.html @@ -3,8 +3,9 @@ {% set active_page = "closing-disclosure" %} {% set page_js = "closing-disclosure" %} + {% block title %}Closing Disclosure Explainer{% endblock title %} -{% block metadescription %}Use the CFPB's tool to double-check that all the details about your loan are correct on your Closing Disclosure.{% endblock metadescription %} +{% block metadescription %}Use this tool to double-check that all the details about your loan are correct on your Closing Disclosure. If something looks incorrect or unexpected, ask why.{% endblock metadescription %} {% block content %}
@@ -56,7 +57,7 @@

Closing Disclosure Explainer

{% include "ratings-form.html" %}
- + diff --git a/src/explore-rates/index.html b/src/explore-rates/index.html index 39c901063..25435fbe2 100644 --- a/src/explore-rates/index.html +++ b/src/explore-rates/index.html @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ {% block title %}Explore interest rates{% endblock title %} -{% block metadescription %}Use the CFPB's tool throughout your homebuying process to explore the range of mortgage interest rates you can expect to receive.{% endblock metadescription %} +{% block metadescription %}Use this tool throughout your homebuying process to see how your credit score, home price, down payment, and more can affect mortgage interest rates.{% endblock metadescription %} {% block content %}
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@

About this tool

{% include "no_js.html" %} - +
diff --git a/src/loan-estimate/index.html b/src/loan-estimate/index.html index 084b06c6d..d246d2535 100644 --- a/src/loan-estimate/index.html +++ b/src/loan-estimate/index.html @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ {% set page_js = "loan-estimate" %} {% block title %}Loan Estimate Explainer{% endblock title %} -{% block metadescription %}Use the CFPB's tool to review your Loan Estimate to make sure it reflects what you discussed with the lender.{% endblock metadescription %} +{% block metadescription %}A Loan Estimate tells you important details about a mortgage loan you have requested. Use this tool to make sure it’s accurate—and what you expected.{% endblock metadescription %} {% block content %}
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@

Loan Estimate Explainer

{% include "ratings-form.html" %}
- +
diff --git a/src/loan-options/index.html b/src/loan-options/index.html index 21d8ebba4..364797c6f 100644 --- a/src/loan-options/index.html +++ b/src/loan-options/index.html @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ {% block title %}Understand loan options{% endblock title %} -{% block metadescription %}Not all home loans are the same. Use the CFPB's guide to understand how different variables affect your monthly payment, your overall costs, and your level of risk.{% endblock metadescription %} +{% block metadescription %}Not all home loans are the same. Use our guide to understand how your loan choice affects your monthly payment, your overall costs, and the level of risk.{% endblock metadescription %} {% block content %}
@@ -425,8 +425,8 @@

Special programs

]%} {{ brand_footer.render(footer_links) }} - - + +
diff --git a/src/mortgage-closing/index.html b/src/mortgage-closing/index.html index 39078ee3f..988104de3 100644 --- a/src/mortgage-closing/index.html +++ b/src/mortgage-closing/index.html @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ {% import "social-media.html" as social_media with context %} {% set active_page = "mortgage-closing" %} {% block title %}Questions about your closing?{% endblock title %} -{% block metadescription %}Are you about to close on your mortgage loan? The CFPB's checklist and interactive sample Closing Disclosure form will help you close with confidence.{% endblock metadescription %} +{% block metadescription %}Our interactive sample Closing Disclosure helps you double-check the details and get definitions for terms used on the form.{% endblock metadescription %} {% block content %}
diff --git a/src/mortgage-estimate/index.html b/src/mortgage-estimate/index.html index 7c20fefef..1c4e8bdbd 100644 --- a/src/mortgage-estimate/index.html +++ b/src/mortgage-estimate/index.html @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ {% import "social-media.html" as social_media with context %} {% set active_page = "mortgage-estimate" %} {% block title %}Questions about the mortgage process?{% endblock title %} -{% block metadescription %}If you’ve received a Loan Estimate, you may be wondering what's next. The CFPB's tools and resources help you choose a mortgage that’s right for you.{% endblock metadescription %} +{% block metadescription %}Our interactive sample form helps you double-check the details and get definitions for terms used on a Loan Estimate.{% endblock metadescription %} {% block content %}
diff --git a/src/process/_vars-process.html b/src/process/_vars-process.html index f3d95d0aa..ac22f2909 100644 --- a/src/process/_vars-process.html +++ b/src/process/_vars-process.html @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@ -{% set process_steps = +{% set process_steps = [ { "url": "prepare", "title": "Prepare
to shop", "slug": "prepare-to-shop", "page_title": "Prepare to shop", - "metadescription": "Before you start shopping for a home and mortgage, use our step-by-step guide to check your credit, assess your finances, set your home-price budget and more.", + "metadescription": "Before shopping for a home and mortgage, use our step-by-step guide to check your credit, assess your finances, set your budget, and more.", "social": { "twitter_text": "Check out the 8 steps to prepare to buy a home from @cfpb.", "email_title": "8 steps to prepare to buy a home", @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ "title": "Explore
loan choices", "slug": "explore-loan-options", "page_title": "Explore loan choices", - "metadescription": "Don’t wait until you find a home to start thinking about how to finance it. Use the CFPB’s guide to meet with lenders and ask the right questions.", + "metadescription": "As you explore loan choices, follow these steps to meet with lenders, ask questions, and decide what kind of mortgage is right for you.", "social": { "twitter_text": "Wondering what kind of mortgage is right for you? @CFPB can help!:", "email_title": "Be a mortgage explorer: Learn your options", @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ "title": "Compare
loan offers", "slug": "compare-and-negotiate-loan-packages", "page_title": "Compare loan offers", - "metadescription": "Ready to choose a mortgage loan and a lender? Use the CFPB’s guide to get and compare Loan Estimates from different lenders.", + "metadescription": "When you find the right home, it’s time to find the right mortgage. Compare options from at least 3 lenders to choose the loan that's right for you.", "social": { "twitter_text": "To get the best deal on your mortgage, get more than one loan offer. @CFPB shows you how:", "email_title": "Choose the mortgage loan offer that’s right for you.", @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ "title": "Get ready
to close", "slug": "decide-and-close", "page_title": "Get ready to close", - "metadescription": "Ready to close on a home? Use the CFPB’s guide for help reviewing your closing documents, shopping for homeowner’s and title insurance, and more.", + "metadescription": "Signing your closing documents is the final step in the homebuying process. Here’s a breakdown of the paperwork and other things you need to keep track of.", "social": { "twitter_text": "@CFPB helps you close with confidence on your mortgage:", "email_title": "Get ready to close on your mortgage", @@ -67,6 +67,3 @@ } ] %} - - -